My body is lifeless
You took all I had to give
Every movement now is an effort
And I only have you to thank
I let this happen
Let your essence cover me
Allowed you to penetrate
The special place
That you fit into so well
You were constant
Relentlessness and demanding
And I gave it to you
With out concern of caution
I let you take over me
Again and again
And again
And then begged for more
I told you that you
Could have it
Take it,
Claim it,
Told you it was yours
And like a caged animal
That has been set free to feed
You devoured me
And let nothing but this feeling
I can't move
I can still feel you in me
From head to toe
You have left your mark
This is what happens when
Inhibition are released
Fantasies are realized
This is the aftermath...
Melony, this is a powerful poem, exploring the clash of Fantasy with the real world.
ReplyDeleteI'm currently reading Larry Brooks' Darkness Bound, which is a novel exploring the theme from a man's point of view.
Cheers,
Mitch
I will have to Kindle that! I wanted to capture that feeling right after a release. Its almost like the same feeling when you end other things. The close can be traumatic... some trauma is necessary
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this poem. You are so talented
ReplyDeletethank you so much
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